10'6" jump... help?

[spill21]

Age: 16
Grade: 10
How long you have been jumping: 1 year
What pole you are on (length and weight rating): 12'9" 145 6.35 flex
How high you are gripping: top hand: 12'2" lower hand: 10'1" (which one does specifically?)
What bar(s) you are attempting in the video: 10'6"

I know not as strcict with my lower arm as I should be but I think that has something to do with me bein' nervous about beeaking another pole. But its wrong, please tell me what else I'm doing wrong? thanks in advance!

http://www.treemo.com/users/spill21/cha ... em/324234/